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Okay, this blog is quite well developed now, so we really need to get that footage to create a product that matches the research and planning! However, there are a few minor things to work on:

• go back over the early analysis of opening sequences etc and ensure that all have a comment at the end that clarifies what you have learnt/ can copy as a result of looking at what works well...
• cast list - add some cast shots and comment on why the people chosen suit there role
• location shots - these look good, so add some comment to this post about why you have chosen this location - why it suits what you are trying to achieve
• the reflection on the box office stats - I agree with the disadvantage of using a popular genre but what do you try and do to overcome this - can you define what your USP is?
• audience section - not sure I agree with your claim that thrillers are generally enjoyed by all - whilst both genders can enjoy them, often they are more of a male thing? For each of your audience segmentation reflections, can you add comment on what aspects you will use in your film that will appeal to these sectors? You could end this section by commenting on whether it is mainstream or niche and why you want to target just such an audience....

As well as tweaking these details in your own time, make sure you have chosen your music - there is a list of sites in your booklet and Rachel has some CDs of copyright free music....

Please get your footage asap and start editing, so we can see where we are....

Mrs Doggart